{"id":548,"date":"2009-09-18T18:53:49","date_gmt":"2009-09-18T18:53:49","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/?p=548"},"modified":"2009-09-18T18:53:49","modified_gmt":"2009-09-18T18:53:49","slug":"episode-9-commentary-taking-my-time","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/?p=548","title":{"rendered":"Episode 9 Commentary &#8211; Taking My Time."},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The reaction from Episode 9 has been great. Amazingly, resoundingly great.<\/p>\n<p>People have been into every aspect of the episode &#8211; the art, coloring, pacing, dialog, backgrounds &#8211; I&#8217;ve gotten great feedback on every side of the episode.<\/p>\n<p>Below is a collection of &#8216;pages&#8217; from Petra&#8217;s Call. <\/p>\n<p>On the left are images from Episode 9, on the right are three of my favorite images from the earlier episodes.  Even with a quick glance anyone can see there&#8217;s a big difference in the style, consistency, composition and overall feel of the pages.<br \/>\n<figure id=\"attachment_549\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-549\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><a href=\"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/09\/EP9_Commentary_IMG.png\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" src=\"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/09\/EP9_Commentary_IMG-300x270.png\" alt=\"Taking my time - and the work gets better.\" title=\"EP9_Commentary_IMG\" width=\"300\" height=\"270\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-549\" srcset=\"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/09\/EP9_Commentary_IMG-300x270.png 300w, http:\/\/nrdland.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/09\/EP9_Commentary_IMG.png 1000w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-549\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Taking my time - and the work gets better.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/p>\n<p>While my process is always changing and I&#8217;m always trying new things, the biggest contributor to the improvements in Episode 9 is that I made one simple and major change:<\/p>\n<p>I took my time.<\/p>\n<p>Up until Episode 9, I had been working with tight schedules and was always pushing myself for the deadline.  <\/p>\n<p>&#8220;I have to get all of the pages inked in the next 2 hours &#8211; and then it&#8217;s done.&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;I have 2 mornings to get the whole issue penciled, if it isn&#8217;t done in time, it doesn&#8217;t matter, I&#8217;m going to inks.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>I needed to take more time and give myself more perspective on the work.  This let me do a few key things that weren&#8217;t part of my process before.<\/p>\n<p>A) Editorial feedback from my wife.  I gave my wife 5 drafts through script to final art. She gave me a lot of dialog and pacing feedback that made a big difference.<\/p>\n<p>B) Redrawing and redrawing some more. From thumbs to final inks, I spent a lot more time sweating the details.  It took a lot longer, but it was worth it.<\/p>\n<p>C) Taking a breather.  Stepping away from the work to work on something else and coming back with fresh eyes.  A big step here was doing the old &#8216;horizontal flip&#8217; trick, where you flip the art 180 degrees horizontally, which exposes mistakes you wouldn&#8217;t have caught otherwise.<\/p>\n<p>D) Putting in the extra time.  Making a fully colored comic, plus setting up the site, Flash browser and everything else (you know &#8211; day job making video games, wife and kid, etc) takes a lot of time.  I had set aside two hours every morning to work on Petra&#8217;s Call &#8211; and that was it.  Now I am spending more evenings and weekends working on the comic as well.<\/p>\n<p>All of these have helped me &#8216;Level up&#8217; with my work on Petra&#8217;s Call and I am at a point where I&#8217;m a lot happier with the work I&#8217;m producing.  <\/p>\n<p>Now &#8211; back to the drawing.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The reaction from Episode 9 has been great. Amazingly, resoundingly great. People have been into every aspect of the episode &#8211; the art, coloring, pacing, dialog, backgrounds &#8211; I&#8217;ve gotten great feedback on every side of the episode. Below is a collection of &#8216;pages&#8217; from Petra&#8217;s Call. On the left are images from Episode 9, &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/?p=548\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Episode 9 Commentary &#8211; Taking My Time.&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":"","_links_to":"","_links_to_target":""},"categories":[3,12,7],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/548"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=548"}],"version-history":[{"count":9,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/548\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":558,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/548\/revisions\/558"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=548"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=548"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nrdland.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=548"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}